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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By acting as though it is a real world, you are but a commoner along with (almost) every one else, everyone has equal chances to do things, each have their own free will and are your family and friends, no one should be a "god" or absolute ruler, but a community of people enjoying the freedom of minecraft roleplay.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by causing events to not play out well/properly or in an unfun way, for example say in a vc two people are talking about an uprising against their ruler, and you go on to tell everyone in chat, its not fun or fair and can make the lore/story uninteresting because it can just play out as "oh they are uprising, now everyone knows, now they have stopped" in an endless boring loop.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"Oh, uh…" I stutter, I eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, I felt uneasy, then I give in to tell my tale. "I was always seeking adventure since I was a young lad, I would end up causing trouble for my village, my older brother Edrin, would always tell me stories about his adventures, they fascinated me, so much so that I once begged him to teach me to use a bow, after a long while he gave in and taught me all the skills I know today, how to hunt, how to skin, how to line up my shot so I don't waste many arrows, he was my idol, until my fateful 17th birthday, where I learned that he had been killed by a dragon, ever since I have wanted to grow stronger, to get revenge on the dragons, when I turned 18 I was allowed to leave my village in the hopes of getting stronger to one day defeat that dragon, I survived on my own, travelled through towns, and now... here I am."


Character Name: Arden Moonshadow
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: They have green eyes, dirty blonde hair, 154 pounds, 6ft, they usually wear sleek forest green robes like an archer or a forest green leather jerkin.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your roleplay response should be at least 6 sentences with proper sentence breaks to indicate so.

 

- Your character actions should be written in 3rd person point of view, meaning he/she and she/him

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Your roleplay response should be at least 6 sentences with proper sentence breaks to indicate so.

 

- Your character actions should be written in 3rd person point of view, meaning he/she and she/him

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is KaptainScarlet If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @KaptainScarlet 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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