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Moonreefe

By Moonreefe

    • Rules: No
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: unknownlore
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Being reasonable about the actions your character could perform, and prioritizing others fun over the need to be better or more powerful. Keeping that ego in check!
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming causes your character to be unfairly knowledgable, giving you an unfair advantage and disrupting the natural flow of things. It causes the way your character interacts to be less authentic, and can derail the story.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Kele bows her head in acknowledgement and respect, sitting on the cushion. "You were expecting me?" She looks as if she's confused, but trying to be polite. "I'm sure this town is lovely! I'm only passing through." She laughs nervously. "I was sent to fetch something from the next town over. But...I just keep getting lost, I don't even know how far I've..." She sighs deeply. "I don't mean to trouble you with my troubles. I'm just known for getting lost." She taps a wooden stick against her hand. "My story...," she purses her lips, humming. "I feel like I've been wandering since I was born. As purposelessly as a leaf on the breeze. My own people saw that I had a natural green thumb, and so I was sent to live with a colony of wood elves for a spell. A...," she laughs, but its hollow, "A spell. But after I lead a group of orcs into the colony by getting lost...," she shakes her head. "I've never found a place I belonged. Not yet, at least. I feel...," she shifts uncomfortably, "I feel like I may be...," she whispers, "cursed?" Her eyes are wide with anxiety, and then she laughs abruptly, shaking her head, "But that would be silly! How could I be cursed. After all, haven't we all...haven't we all already been cursed? Erm. Anyway," she waves her hand as if to clear the awkwardness away.

 

In the blink of an eye, her memory takes her to the moment she had left on this strange journey, meaning only to retrieve something from the next town over. She had been bewildered, knowing that she was so often known to wander, and yet she had taken the basket of food and supplies and taken off. She gasps, turning to the woman, "They were trying to get rid of me!"

Character Name: Kelekouri
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Darker hair and ashy grey skin offset by opal green eyes. Dark purple clothing, fading in some spots.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No purple skin - it appears more purple then grey, no purple hair.

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic - this includes curses! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No purple skin - it appears more purple then grey, no purple hair.

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic - this includes curses! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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