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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. (Axe wielding, receding hairline)

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

• Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
• Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly! (Hair color)
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. 
• Tharbad/Trollshaws does not exist in LoTC lore, so I recommend editing this part of your Character Biography.

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message teawithsarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at teawithsarah#0808

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above! ♥

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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