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Aoife

By Aoife

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Jaws#8713
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Creating or somehow obtaining a character, who had no prior knowledge of a certain topic, somehow become totally aware or an expert on that topic.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Creating, playing as, or obtaining an OP character(s)
    Status: Denied

Aoife boarded her wagon, departing the large ship and heading down the port. As she exited the busy port, she heard a man calling out to her among the crowd, waving to catch her attention. She smiled, slowing her wagon down as the man approached, and hopped down to stand in front of the gentleman. She stuck out her hand to shake his, smiling.

 

“I’m just here to observe. I’d love to see what it has to offer, mind showing me around?” She gestured to her wagon; an old, beat up covered wagon pulled by a Clydesdale. The man shook her hand, then hopped onto the seat of the old thing. Aoife climbed back up, taking the reins in her hands. The two strolled down the bustling streets, the stranger pointing out landmarks and popular restaurants, store fronts, residential areas, while Aoife steered down the narrow streets. She was extra careful not the hit pedestrians before stopping in front of a bakery, letting the stranger hop off. They said their goodbyes, and Aoife was on her way to the country side.

Character Name: Aoife Dóiteáin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Lean body. Pale skin, freckles, auburn hair, green eyes. Purple & gold shawl, brown boots & trousers, green tunic, shirt & emerald necklace, satchel.
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Amelica

 

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to it having too many errors. However, here are the changes that you’d need to make:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography states that your character learned magic-based combat skills. You cannot teach any such abilities to your characters prior to server acceptance; all such skills must be developed through roleplay on the server. Please correct accordingly.
  • Your Character Biography states that your character can perform Arcane Illusion and Evocation. Again, you cannot include such skills in your character bio. I advise that you remove these references and replace them with something else.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race – humans cannot have orange hair. Please correct this accordingly!

 

After correcting the above errors, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord by using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

 
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