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Qwerty113
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I would avoid powergaming by utilizing the phrase: attempt to do [an action]. This is so other players can respond to that action accordingly and to avoid any actions my character is not physically fit to preform.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by allowing your character to automatically understand/know something that they shouldn't have known in the first place unless going through the required steps to finding out what that thing is. It allows the player to skip past the steps necessary for that character to know something, making it unfair for everyone else who had to go through those steps.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

I freeze momentarily, grasping the situation. I hesitate for a second, but I quickly sit down on the dirty cushion. I say, "Oh.. well.. before I explain anything to you.. how do you know who I am? I don't think we've met before.." The woman, still looking at me, urges me to continue. I uncomfortably decide to go on with an explanation, "Uhm.. well perhaps I could tell you a bit about myself.." Sliding my hand across my hair nervously. I begin to speak again, "I come from an old farming village up north, so it was slow growing up. The village was known for the assortment of breads we made and fish we cultivated.. but something awful happened." The woman leans in, attentively. "Near dusk, a horde of people.. I believe they were people, it was difficult to make them out.. ravaged our village and destroyed our crops." My eyes grew bigger, as the story grew dimmer. "I was one of few who managed to escape.. so I've been wandering, trying to put the pieces together of who destroyed my small town.. I don't even have the knowledge of whether my parents made it out or not." The hag looks at me with empathetic eyes. I look back at her and add, "Well, there's my story.. please, tell me yours.. how do you know me?"


Character Name: Erwin Nightingale
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Height: 5'8ft; Weight: 153lbs; Hair: Medium in length, black; Eye color: Green; Outfit: Brown Vest/Tunic, white undershirt, Black Breeches
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions - in the third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

- Please mention your backstory even if they do not normally speak about it.

 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions - in the third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions - in the third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord


If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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